3. My definition of madness would be being crazy and going to an extreme level and doing something. For someone to be consideresd mad would commit murder or burn a house or rape someone and that is just sheer madness.
4. what drives people to be mad today in these world i think would be jealously and it might cause the spouse or person to go to extremes and kill or harm someone.
peer pressure might be also a constricting conflict in teens and might cuae harm such as suicide or cutting themselves.
i think someone as normal as anyone might be afflicted with lots of pain and they not want to talk about it and so they use the easy way and the bad way out of the situation.
Wednesday, October 24, 2007
creating fear assignment
1. I don't that much scary movies but some times it may be fun and interesting to watch at times. And the setting that i like are first create a suspenseful begining and make people haunted and after making them go round and round then scare them.
2.The things that scares me a lot or frighten me are cats and just wild animals and also to stay at home all alone and it freaks me out. and i bad fear i have i don't like seeing other people or for my blood casue i cry and i feel like i am going to die. Since i was young i just had the same fear and i grew up in a bad neighborhood ful of crime and wars going on. Afraid of something horribly going wrong.
2.The things that scares me a lot or frighten me are cats and just wild animals and also to stay at home all alone and it freaks me out. and i bad fear i have i don't like seeing other people or for my blood casue i cry and i feel like i am going to die. Since i was young i just had the same fear and i grew up in a bad neighborhood ful of crime and wars going on. Afraid of something horribly going wrong.
Thursday, October 11, 2007
assignment 5 short story opener
1. My original short story opener wwas like these
Mary, the school head girl had never felt so imperfect before. She was raised by wonderful , down to earth parents whom she loved with all her mighty heart.One sunday morning mary was in their small hut which she shared with her entire family.
2.character description:
Mary was a beautiful girl , her hair was dark and shiny , her teeth was white as snow and she always smiled despite any sadness and suffering she felt. Mary's personality was that of an adult she never took anything personal and everyone loved they way she presented her self.
3. dialogue
"Hi there," Mary said." What a splendous evening it is," Danniel said.
"what brings you by , nothing i just wanted to get some fresh air," Daniel said."What a lovily gesture that is ," i nodded.
4.action:
The wind was blowing swiftly , there was a pin drop of silence as the man came drunk and blured everyone's secret. you could barely here anything by wind blowing so hardly that we thought the building would crash.
5.action. blood was running down his face and i imagined it felt like a basin with alot of water.
you could imagine the heart beat of everyone.
Mary, the school head girl had never felt so imperfect before. She was raised by wonderful , down to earth parents whom she loved with all her mighty heart.One sunday morning mary was in their small hut which she shared with her entire family.
2.character description:
Mary was a beautiful girl , her hair was dark and shiny , her teeth was white as snow and she always smiled despite any sadness and suffering she felt. Mary's personality was that of an adult she never took anything personal and everyone loved they way she presented her self.
3. dialogue
"Hi there," Mary said." What a splendous evening it is," Danniel said.
"what brings you by , nothing i just wanted to get some fresh air," Daniel said."What a lovily gesture that is ," i nodded.
4.action:
The wind was blowing swiftly , there was a pin drop of silence as the man came drunk and blured everyone's secret. you could barely here anything by wind blowing so hardly that we thought the building would crash.
5.action. blood was running down his face and i imagined it felt like a basin with alot of water.
you could imagine the heart beat of everyone.
Wednesday, October 3, 2007
task two_
1.make the story suspenseful - these will enable the reader to think so much and to love the story and make an inference of whats going to happen next.
2.use metaphors and makes the the flow of the story look pretty neat.
3.conflict in the story- people will enjoy the story and it will make a sparkle on the story.
4.The plot make it look good and without a plot the story won't have a visual flow and the story would relatively be boring.
5.characters- characters should be strong and existing in part one and two and will enable reader to pay attention.
6. emotions - it is better for a story to have emotion because it gasps the readers attention and the story would be lifeless without emotion.
7.originality and uniqueness will make the story be good and you don't have to share ideas that has been used over and over again.
8. action e.g fight scenes would make the story look good
9. complete ending of the story would be more interesting for the audience .
10.humor , jokes , laughter would make the story intersting and unique.
1.make the story suspenseful - these will enable the reader to think so much and to love the story and make an inference of whats going to happen next.
2.use metaphors and makes the the flow of the story look pretty neat.
3.conflict in the story- people will enjoy the story and it will make a sparkle on the story.
4.The plot make it look good and without a plot the story won't have a visual flow and the story would relatively be boring.
5.characters- characters should be strong and existing in part one and two and will enable reader to pay attention.
6. emotions - it is better for a story to have emotion because it gasps the readers attention and the story would be lifeless without emotion.
7.originality and uniqueness will make the story be good and you don't have to share ideas that has been used over and over again.
8. action e.g fight scenes would make the story look good
9. complete ending of the story would be more interesting for the audience .
10.humor , jokes , laughter would make the story intersting and unique.
a. The author is trying to capture the readers attention, because connie is home alone and the two guys drive up to her place and they had met with one another at the restuarant and he started addressing her by her name but she did not remember him.
b. Her character is kind of reversed through out the story when her dad's friend takes the girls to the shopping plaza they sneak and go to a drive in restaurant where older boys hang out . she goes out with these random guy who she barely knows , she sees arnold friend watching her and he says" gonna get ya baby"it's as if she drawing attention to the boys. i presume that she is asking for trouble and her behavior is eratic because the guy tells her he is going to do stuff to her.
c .conflicts between connie and her parents
conflicts with connie and her sister
d.the story appeals to many people because it draws attention to the readers in that connie is at home alone and two guys visit her which is kind of red flag for the readers.
e.at the end of the story connie passes out and she gets up and goes along with the two boys and i think she had feelings for arnold.
b. Her character is kind of reversed through out the story when her dad's friend takes the girls to the shopping plaza they sneak and go to a drive in restaurant where older boys hang out . she goes out with these random guy who she barely knows , she sees arnold friend watching her and he says" gonna get ya baby"it's as if she drawing attention to the boys. i presume that she is asking for trouble and her behavior is eratic because the guy tells her he is going to do stuff to her.
c .conflicts between connie and her parents
conflicts with connie and her sister
d.the story appeals to many people because it draws attention to the readers in that connie is at home alone and two guys visit her which is kind of red flag for the readers.
e.at the end of the story connie passes out and she gets up and goes along with the two boys and i think she had feelings for arnold.
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