Wednesday, October 3, 2007

task two_
1.make the story suspenseful - these will enable the reader to think so much and to love the story and make an inference of whats going to happen next.
2.use metaphors and makes the the flow of the story look pretty neat.
3.conflict in the story- people will enjoy the story and it will make a sparkle on the story.
4.The plot make it look good and without a plot the story won't have a visual flow and the story would relatively be boring.
5.characters- characters should be strong and existing in part one and two and will enable reader to pay attention.
6. emotions - it is better for a story to have emotion because it gasps the readers attention and the story would be lifeless without emotion.
7.originality and uniqueness will make the story be good and you don't have to share ideas that has been used over and over again.
8. action e.g fight scenes would make the story look good
9. complete ending of the story would be more interesting for the audience .
10.humor , jokes , laughter would make the story intersting and unique.

1 comment:

bri said...

HI HAMDI!!!!!
I REALLY AGREE WITH YOUR CHOICE OF WHAT MAKES A GOOD STORY. I ALSO WANT TO SAY I READ YOUR POEMS...AND THEY'RE SO HEART TOUCHING TO READ ABOUT DARFUR AND WHAT GOES ON IN AFRICA BECAUSE PEOPLE THAT AREN'T FROM THERE REALLY DON'T UNDERSTAND WHAT GOES ON. AND FOR YOU TO WRITE ABOUT THAT IS REALLY GREAT.
LOVE YA GURL!!!!!